A thriller short story, car boot sales and a good plot. 'A story to die for!'
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A story to die for
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  Then he disappeared ......

  People instantly missed him.

  "Where's old One Eye", they would say at the car boot sale. "He's not been around for a while. Silly old duffer - hope he hasn't come to harm. Couldn't write of course - but I'd buy the odd one just out of charity really. Do you know where he lived - did he have any family?"

  And so it went on. For years, although an oddball, he had been part of the community. Now he was remembered with affection. As the weeks then months passed, slowly his name passed into folk memory.

  "Used to be a writer at this car boot you know. Suddenly disappeared. Never did hear what happened to him. They say he was offered a job on a London Magazine as a features writer - around here probably wasn't not good enough for him, I'll warrant. Of course we felt let down after we'd supported him all those years by buying his silly stories. I doubt we'll ever know where he went to now.

  But they did get to know and in the strangest way you could imagine.

  Photocopied sheets of typed paper suddenly began to appear around the town, in a telephone box … on the counter of the local paper shop.

  "I don't know how they got there," said Barney, the owner.

  More copies appeared and each without warning and from unexpected places.

  Some people, once they had got a copy and got over the shock of the contents, did more. They copied the pages again - and gave them to their friends.

  "It reads like One Eye, the style is the same and the pages look the same, but when you read inside, you can't see how it can be!"

  The same phrases passed backwards and forwards from mouth to mouth and each time another pair of eyes would avidly read the lurid tale. Some were moved to tears.

  "I could just see the woods and feel how he loved them as he walked on that final journey. Rhododendrons have always been a favorite of mine but to be buried under one - I couldn't bear that.

  "For me it was the way he fought of his attacker until his one eye got so damaged he couldn't see at all. How he broke away at one point and then hid from them wounded and bleeding for hours - how they eventually found him again and even then he still fought on."

  "But he was outnumbered and they got him in the end. And the people responsible did it all for a contract - they had nothing against him themselves. It was all just for money."

  "I reckon it was money that was behind it anyway. He'd offended too many local people in high places."

  "In my opinion the police ought to investigate that politician, he's the one that the stories were about. He's the one that had the motive and the money and opportunity."

  "Don't be daft, it's only a story!"

  "I'm not so sure - it rings true to me - more than you might think.

  "Anyway how would the police know which rhododendron to look under. There's hundreds up there in the woods."

  "They could get our help - I'd be willing to put in a few hours with a shovel and a fork for good old One Eye."

  "And what about if you found him, you'd jump a mile high in the air you would. You nearly fainted when they killed that goose at the last 'Goose Fair'.

  "I don't care. It would be worth it if it got the heap of slime that did it his just desserts.

  "Well you can bet I'll never vote for him again!"

  The elections came round and the local dignitary was appalled at the result of the votes. In office for years, he now came a dismal third. His speech was full of half references to unsubstantiated gossip and rumor mongers but he was out of office and many people felt a little better.

  Then television latched onto the story and pretty soon the now ex-politician was facing their investigations into his activities. Yet more printed details of One Eyes' final hours were found in public places.

  They told of how his home had been broken into and his family threatened. Steamy details of the dignitary's love nest were also revealed and still nobody knew where they came from.

  "Bank accounts in Switzerland, he had and an illegitimate son from that dolly bird he kept in his London flat - and him a married man that we're supposed respect!"

  "That bit about him, dressing up at that party was too smutty for me. I don't like reading about that sort of thing - it's filth."

  "But you can't deny that it goes on. Better out in the open where everybody can know about it."

  Then, one morning, posters appeared everywhere around town inviting residents to go to the police station at one o'clock in the afternoon to carry out a search of the woodsto assist police enquiry's.

  When they all arrived, the Chief of the local constabulary didn't like to admit that neither he nor any of his officers had issued the posters. Fearing a public riot, if he didn't appear committed, he quickly organized the search.

  The area they concentrated on was a bleak tree covered hollow between the two parts of the village. Nobody had ever built any properties there because of the marshes. But the rhododendrons loved it and thrived in the hundreds.

  Some brought their children to help, running and cavorting besides them. Others pushed their young ones along in buggies that snagged on the uneven paths. Amongst all was a steely determination that at long last, justice would be done.

  When eventually, after hours of determined searching, the body was found, the cry that went up was fit to have wakened the dead and echoed eerily around the surrounding hills. Then, silently, with heads bowed in respect and tired sadness they trudged back through the woods to await the autopsy in their homes.

  The arrests followed soon afterwards. The politician first and then his helpers. As he tried to wriggle out of it by saying he had only meant for the hired muscle to frighten One Eye not to kill him.

  And how had the autopsy confirmed their guilt? The horrifying facts soon became clear.

  Inside One Eyes rotting stomach along with the residue of his last days meal was a plastic coin bag. Inside the coin bag was a hurriedly hand written sheet that described his attackers and their paymaster, gave their names and full details that eventually let directly to their imprisonment.

  In those last moments of freedom before his attackers had found him again, grievously wounded and knowing that he had only minutes more to live, One Eye had written down everything that he knew, placed the A4 sheet in the coin bag and swallowed it. It was enough to seal his attackers fate.

  And who was it that somehow knew where to find him? Nobody knows. But to this day, when the local car boot sale comes round, there is a new figure on the wooden box declaiming to the assembled crowd about stories they won't dare to read and then selling them for only one pound sterling each.

  Some say he's also been published by a London company and that the book carries a dedication:

  "To the bravest man I've ever known - my dad!"

The End


©  Rob Hopcott 1999 - 2005 all rights reserved. All characters are fictitious in this story and no reference is intended to any person living or otherwise.

Author's note

   'Phew! That fair brings a lump to my throat every time I read it - even knowing the ending! (How I wish I was brave enough to sell my short stories at car boot sales!)

    It's funny isn't it that the secret of every thriller murder mystery is not the violence itself but the powerful human feelings that lie at the heart of the short story mystery. Perhaps a thriller is not a thriller, however good the plot - unless we care for those that die(shudder)'.


Rob.

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